Chapter 5

Group Seven, 65th of 65

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The intake hall had voices all the way from the door. Ren heard them before he could see them. Parents mostly, overlapping reassurance, adults calming down their own anxiety by calming down someone else. Per 35 filtered it into individual conversations without being asked.

Stop, he thought. I don't need that.

It didn't stop.

He stepped through the entrance and counted roughly forty students, maybe more. Most of them had someone with them. A father with a hand on a shoulder, a mother running through something on a paper, a pair of parents near the back who had paid a lot of money and were watching to see it confirmed. Ren was one of maybe six people standing alone. He stopped counting after that.

He found the short-payment intake line and got in it.


The intake officer was a man in his fifties with a face built by decades of classifying students, decades that had made the work neither satisfying nor dissatisfying, just a thing that happened. He took Ren's paperwork without looking up. He read the F-provisional card without changing expression. He entered things into a ledger for eleven seconds.

"Foundation Track Six," he said. "Group Seven." He wrote a number in the margin. "Sixty-fifth of sixty-five."

Ren counted out nine marks and twelve coppers onto the counter. The officer noted the amount, wrote something in the ledger, and said the remaining balance was two marks eighty-eight coppers, payable before the end of term or held against dormitory allocation. He said it the way people say things they have said four hundred times.

He slid the dormitory assignment across the desk and finally looked up.

It was a professional look. Efficient, neutral, no warmth and no cruelty. Paperwork done, job complete. It lasted about three seconds.

Ren took the dormitory slip and walked away.

Last, he thought. Sixty-fifth of sixty-five. Great. Perfect.

He found an empty bench in the waiting block and sat down. His bag went between his feet. A father near the entrance was straightening his son's collar for what was clearly not the first time. The son was doing that thing where you go very still and wait for it to be over. Ren watched this for a moment and felt nothing in particular about it.


"You got your secondary form yet?"

The person next to him was already talking when Ren looked over. He was wide-set and broad-shouldered, with a grin that had been there before he sat down and would probably be there when he left. He talked fast and naturally, no gap between sentences, filling the space before silence could settle.

"Secondary form, they give you one when you check in? Long one, a page and a half?"

"Yeah," Ren said. He had it in his bag.

"Good, get that done now. I already did mine." He stuck out a hand. "Dask. Dask Lourne, from Ven Calder. Two days southwest, if you know the roads. Group Two."

Ren shook it. "Ren."

"Ren what?"

"Ashwick."

"Ashwick." Dask nodded, filing it somewhere. "Group Seven, right? I saw you in the short-payment line." He said it without weight, an observation. "I'm C-grade. Iron Tusk. Boar-type, force-primary." Flat, plain, just facts on the table. "Family had to save three years for the supervised facility, my dad's a Hunter so we had a contact, still almost missed the window. What's yours?"

It didn't feel like a test. It was just a question.

"F-provisional," Ren said. "Unclassified creature."

"Harken," Dask said, reading the card where it sat visible at the top of Ren's paperwork. "How far north is that?"

"Three days by wagon."

"You come alone?"

"Yeah."

Dask absorbed that. He did not comment on it. The silence lasted a breath, and then he was talking again, something about dormitory layouts from a second-term student he'd met at the gate, the canteen food reportedly acceptable except for the porridge -- allegedly a serious problem.

What does he want, the back of Ren's head said. The question ran twice and came back empty. No angle, no investment. Dask was just talking.

That was worse, somehow.

When Dask's group was called, he stood, clapped Ren once on the shoulder, solid and unselfconscious, said he'd see him around, and walked off. Said it like a fact.

Weird, Ren thought.


He pulled out the secondary form and started filling it in. It wanted prior employment history, nearest next of kin, emergency contact information. He was putting "none" in three separate boxes when a voice from three seats back said something about Foundation Track Six.

Not to him. To the group beside the bench -- four students clustered together, all well-dressed, the comfortable posture of people who had never expected anything different. The one talking had a Crimson Viper certification card visible in his front pocket, embossed edge catching the light. Ren's card was on the bench beside the form.

"...Track Six's washout rate, I mean, they're basically already sorted," the voice said. "It's a courtesy slot. My family spent eleven thousand marks to make sure I didn't land there."

One of his friends said something that got a laugh.

"Torrin, keep it down," someone else started.

"I'm serious. Sixty-five people in the intake cohort and they have to put someone last." The voice paused deliberately. "Ashwick, right? That's the name on the card?"

Ren finished the line he was writing. He did not look up. His handwriting did not change.

He completed the secondary form. He squared the pages. He put it in his bag.

Then he stood up and walked to the submission counter at the far wall, placed the form in the bin, and walked out of the waiting block toward the dormitory corridor.

He was angry. Not calculated, just angry, the feeling of someone saying your name in front of people when you have nowhere to put it. His jaw was tight and his hands were in his pockets. Eleven thousand marks. He was going to hear that number again.

What a jackass, he thought. What a complete jackass.


Group Seven dormitory had fifteen bunks. His was number sixteen, a cot in the alcove beside the window, added when the group count came in higher than the room anticipated. He put his bag down.

Students trickled in. Nobody spoke to him. One boy glanced at the alcove and then at his own bunk with the look of someone who had gotten the better deal and was quietly glad about it.

The view through the window was a maintenance courtyard, a drain, some crates.

There was a figure in the corridor. She had a dark notebook and was making marks in it steadily, working down a column. She wasn't looking at any particular student. She had a line of sight to the dormitory entrance and had clearly planned to be exactly where she was.

She had been in the intake hall earlier. He was fairly sure. He noted her and turned back to the window.

The dormitory settled into the sounds of fifteen people arranging belongings, testing mattresses.

He lay back on the cot when the light started to go.


He should have been tired enough to sleep. He had spent two days of loading shifts and walked most of Cauldron City on foot, and the academy had processed him, classified him, assigned him, and put him in a room.

Instead he was staring at the ceiling thinking about the wagon girl's "oh."

He wasn't sure why it kept coming back. Days ago. She had said it flat and gone back to her letter and that was the last he'd seen of her. It was exactly what it was supposed to feel like. He had known that on the wagon.

His left shoulder was still prickling where Dask had landed it. He hadn't tensed in time. That was the part that kept snagging -- not the clap itself, just the fact that it had been the first time in months anyone had touched him without something transactional behind it. He thought about this for a moment because it was less annoying than thinking about Jace Torrin.

Sixty-fifth of sixty-five, he thought. Excellent placement.

Jace Torrin. Eleven thousand marks. The number wasn't the part that bothered him. The part that bothered him was the tone -- the casual ease of saying Ren's name in front of people, like it cost nothing. His jaw was still tight about it.

He turned onto his side. The cot creaked.

Tomorrow was the first training session. He would stand at a target post and produce nothing. That was fine. He knew how to produce nothing.

He stared at the maintenance courtyard and thought about the Crimson Viper for a moment, poison-and-speed, Jace fast and lethal for a long time, and then stopped, because Jace didn't deserve that much attention before he'd even seen a training post.

He couldn't sleep. That was fine too.

He lay there with the ceiling and the creak of someone's mattress and his left shoulder and the "oh" and the dark notebook in the corridor, and none of it resolved, and the first night at the academy came in slow.

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